please evaluate the essay.

I will attach the one essay below.

please read it carefully and evaluate with below two questions.

1. Does this paper identify and question the validity of the assumptions and address the ethical dimensions that underlie the issue?

2. : Does this paper examine the evidence and source of evidence; question its accuracy, precision, relevance, and completeness? Does it clearly distinguish between fact, opinion, and acknowledge value judgments?

I also attach the answer sheet form. please use the answer sheet that I attach.

also, please highlight one of them (exemplary, proficient, acceptable, weak, unacceptable, missing)

I need minimum 100 words each, but no more than 200 words.

if you have any other question, please let me know