I did the early draft I want you to do the final draft (with some changing)

So I did the early Draft and got some feedback from my instructor. I need you to make the necessary changes based on those feedback. My topic is about DACA (800 words). please follow the feedback. APA format.

The Final Draft should be a polished essay (1200-1400 words) that (a) educates an audience of non-engaged stakeholders about the issue or topic; (b) engages the audience by convincing them that they should care about this issue or topic; and (c) empowers the audience to take action in some way.

This draft should include a thesis, all major points, evidence to support these points (including in-text citations from appropriate sources), and a Works Cited page. The document should be free of organizational, grammar, and style errors and should follow proper structure both in formatting the paper and citing sources.