Literature Review

I need this paper to be rewritten in a literature review format and fix what ever needs to be fixed. We have to relate the lit review to our research and explain why we think that literature is good for our research topic. Everything is written just need to be edited and make it more professional. I even have the work cited listed you can look over each one to know what you are going to write. I also provided the actual document before the comments that the professor made make sure to go off based on the comments and MAKE SURE ITS IN A LITERATURE REVIEW FORMAT. THANK YOU.